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Thursday, 9 August 2018

Quickwrite 8th of August 2018

"Its a map"whispered...

Captain cranky. "Yar, she says it goes to treasure on the port bow."  Co-Captain Cameron said. "Yar, it does." Captain cranky explained. "OHNO! but it goes past the Big Octopus and no mans land." He said. "We will get past it" Co-Captain Cameron said.

                               And so their journey begins...

The boat drifted over waves and floated over the first half of the journey, Then...
BANG!! "CAPTAIN WE DRIFTED INTO NO MAN'S LAND!!!"Cameron shrieked. 
"WERE ALL THE WARS ARE" Captain Cranky screamed.  "Get the canons locked and loaded all of them!" Captain cranky shouted.  "INCOMING!"Cameron shouted. The boat lit on fire and little by little the boat broke until...


                           TO BE CONTINUED.....



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