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Thursday, 30 August 2018

Quickwrite 28.8.18 (NOT REAL)

Traffic thundered past as I stood...


On the edge of the motorway as I wondered if someone would stop for me, a small but freezing drop of rain spat from the top of the sky and gracefully fell to the ground as millions more fell afterward. Windscreen wipers of cars going past went up, down, up and down multiple times as they sped past me and getting smaller and smaller as they faded into the distant horizon, as I saw a car slow down and turn on the side of the motorway as I started to shiver in the cold, as they jumped out and said to me "Could you help us, our engine is not working as well as it should be"they explained. "Sure"I said shivering.


Afterward, once the engine was fixed they said "Thank you" then they got in there car, then I opened my mouth to ask if they could give me a ride, but it was to late they had already driven away. I curled up in a ball and covered myself with newspaper and slowly and uncomfortably fell asleep. 


"Hay, wake up, are yall alright?"I heard someone saying. Light hurt my eyes as I got the fright of my life when I saw someone leaning over my head, "Yes, I am fine"I explained. "Oh, good!"The guy said. "By the way my names Farmer Peet, I was riding down the road in my tractor when I saw yall curled up in a ball in the rain so I thought that I would come pick yall up"Peet said. "How long yall been here for?"he carried on. "Oh, about 3 days"I said, feeling like I was going to freeze to death. "Well come on let's hit the road, you can stay with us"Peet kindly suggested. "Okay let's go!"I said. 

Thursday, 23 August 2018

Quickwrite Thursday 23 of August 2018 (NOT REAL)

My knees trembled as I knelt...

Onto the green grass as I heard a crack and a snap as my face smacked the hard, flat ground as everything went black.


                           SEVERAL HOURS LATER...


A loud siren rang in my ears as I woke from my deathly dose, when I said to my Mum "Where am I?"    "Son, oh I am so glad you are awake." Mum cried. "We are on our way to the hospital."Mum said. "Why?" I said quietly. "The cracking and snapping you heard was a tree falling, and everything fell down on you. "Mum replied. "Where is Dad?"I said. "He will be there, now try and just relax"Mum said.



                                   AT THE HOSPITAL...


"beep, beep, beep, beeeeeeeeep" the heart monitor made next door. "He's dead and we don't pay for the funeral, would you like us to try get him alive again for a extra $200 whether it works or not" The doctor from next door said as he came into the my room. 
"Mum when can I turn onto my back?"I asked. "You cant for a while Henry" Dad said as he walked into the room. "Is it because my spine is broken ?"I asked.  

TO BE CONTINUED...

Thursday, 9 August 2018

Quickwrite 8th of August 2018

"Its a map"whispered...

Captain cranky. "Yar, she says it goes to treasure on the port bow."  Co-Captain Cameron said. "Yar, it does." Captain cranky explained. "OHNO! but it goes past the Big Octopus and no mans land." He said. "We will get past it" Co-Captain Cameron said.

                               And so their journey begins...

The boat drifted over waves and floated over the first half of the journey, Then...
BANG!! "CAPTAIN WE DRIFTED INTO NO MAN'S LAND!!!"Cameron shrieked. 
"WERE ALL THE WARS ARE" Captain Cranky screamed.  "Get the canons locked and loaded all of them!" Captain cranky shouted.  "INCOMING!"Cameron shouted. The boat lit on fire and little by little the boat broke until...


                           TO BE CONTINUED.....



Thursday, 2 August 2018

Frustrated!

Dear readers,
Throughout the year we have been writing blog posts and blog comments. I am very annoyed that the blog posts my class and I are getting aren't very good or we are getting no comments at all. Which is how I feel because I have no comments from people other than my blog buddy in my own class. I am very frustrated because I put so much effort into my blog and thought into your comments, but I don't feel like you are doing the same thing. So please have a think about that. This is Henry over and out.